jupitersterrain four

31.02.13. 

4pm misc notes/draft


it ranked number one in terms of stimulants
athletes take great care to avoid such substances

the explosive chasm of a hit 
bombing the trenches

gliding majesty 
it wasn't easy to make breaks from set scrums 
the defense was not allowed to line up with the front row

attempting a scissors or dummy scissors 
he made the defence hesitate and then there was a gap 
he surged through with only the full back to beat 

a languid grace lissom and beautifully balanced 
persuading the ball to do his bidding 


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a stirring fightback had them clinging on for a point at first whistle 
sensing a touchstone  

the response shaped up 
hauled themselves in a dramatic facing agonisingly close to a win
sparking a frenzy 


arriving before the deadline 
he's just bouncing them off 
a thumping header 
flighted a chip 

a stinging drive a deep free kick 
a rasping effort inches past the left post 

hooked a volley into the far corner from the left of the box 


bundling in the ball squeeze a space and slap a shot inside the near post 
mj reviews 


a wonderfully floated pass volleyed 
over the bar on the spin 


i saw a dead dog in the rubbish 
here is the work that stresses you having 
six men work under you 

a social explosion 
a safety valve 
being forced out of his home 

i moved here out of desperation 
i can't eat potential 

bribing them to an asphalt strip in the desert 
would be a wrench 

the economic boom 

characters standing on the columns 
of a democracy will obviously be antagonistic to each other 

universal conflicts when a story breaks heads have to fly 
struggling with the realities of her divorce 

and what do we bring to the table  .. 
commitment that thing you wanted to rebel agains 
why make a rule of it 

self medicating with alcohol 
standing in front of the camera whipping up a béarnaise sauce
bone in a neck and an good layer of fat


cuts of pulled belly rubbing the meat before  cooking 
sauced with contractiction  
brine the pork butt in a liquid smoke for an elusive whiff of charred smoke 
pour over a vinegar mop 


making a contrast between the rich pork and the tangy dressing 
a blast of heat to crisp up the fat 
followed by long slow cooking  

Rankin style 
stuffed into rolls with enough juice to run down your chin 
the potato needs to be breaking up so that you can fry it in the fat 
can work its way into the heart of the chip 

we are trying to create a membrane around the outside of the chip with the first fry 
chip lit 
a jagged musical dealing with the aftermath of serial killings 

struggle tussle no drip satin strimp paint